Hi , I've just tryied your demo.

Good points : interface is working fine, dialogs are worked out.
Bad points : the graphics sources are too various, you used riped screenshots from the original Loom, you shouldn't, you mixed this with other game rips, average drawn sketches and photographs, this is a little bit messy.

Your really should work about your graphics, redraw everything, and the main character as well, that would give your game a really greater value.

Another tip : you should add the keyboard control, to play the drafts, that is really usefull, as faster.

I am waiting for the full release anyway, and see what you have done meanwhile.