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#1
Many thanks fellas! Tried to fix (almost) everything you said (except the hat):





Quote from: auriond on Sat 06/02/2010 16:24:21Also, the arms are a little too short. Stand up, let your arms hang by your sides, and see where your hands are relative to your body. You'll probably find that they're by your hips. The hands on your sprite are currently by his waist.

About the arms being too short, that's quite amusing as my arms ARE too short (though not THAT much  :=). It seems that without noticing I kinda drew myself...

Quote from: SteveMcCrea on Sat 06/02/2010 20:25:30
I'm confused by the character design. He seems to be dressed very oddly. Bright red shorts and an old hat? It's memorable...
I don't have a very clear vision of this guy, so I just threw in anything I had in mind...
#2
Critics' Lounge / First try at a character :)
Fri 05/02/2010 21:29:32
First showing then talking:


And a zoomed version for the short-sighted (can't see anything in the little one myself, I should really get glasses).


I'm trying to develop a simple enough style in order to create a small game.
Note that I usually stay in the stick-people department, so "simple" is quite an understatement.
No interesting biography for the guy, only a horrible taste in clothing.

Please help this frightened lad (me, not the character) :)



P.S. I used this wonderful tutorial as a referrence, I hope it wasn't too helpful...
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