Main character for our new project

AJA · Tue 10/02/2004 20:18:57

Here it is:

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4X

It's drawn mostly by Mad_Reizka but I also helped tweaking him a bit. ;)And it's for Dima Software's new "training" project.

[EDIT]
Here are the two first versions of the front view. We're still working on this view, so these won't be the final versions. The side view could stay as it is without your suggestions/comments

AJA edition / Mad_Reizka edition (in creation order)

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Team:
-Mad_Reizka
-TK
-AJA

About the character:
-High School student
-Doesn't have many friends (if any)
-Quite shy
-Spends much time studying (but he isn't very good at school) and playing adventure games ( :o)
-Some "Bad Boysâ,,¢" have picked on him at school for years

All kinds of comments are important! Thanks!

MadReizka · Tue 10/02/2004 20:21:14

Yes, mostly all was told by AJA here, comments and critic would be nice.

No animations havn't been made yet. We will make our hero to be as complete as it can before animating. With this, I mean direction images.

I was thinking about, changeing the positions of his legs a bit.

Edit:
Aw, that tie needs some work to do in my picture

Pet Terry · Tue 10/02/2004 21:27:23

Looks very nice. He sure looks like a nerdy type guy. You may want to try how he looks with eyebrows.

And what are those two black pixels doing behind his wrist?

MadReizka · Tue 10/02/2004 21:31:30

Its a belt.

Czar · Tue 10/02/2004 22:18:30

Yes, i would agree that his legs look a little too bent, they have the banana effect... no offense :p
Otherwise, on mad_reizika's edit, it looks like he has a fresh unshaved beard... hmm maybe thats not too nerdy?
All in all, it's not bad. 8)

MadReizka · Wed 11/02/2004 09:42:23

Quote from: Czar on Tue 10/02/2004 22:18:30
Yes, i would agree that his legs look a little too bent, they have the banana effect... no offense :p

Which view? Front or side?

Well the guy is not the nerdest guy in the world, so its good to have even some not-nerd-kind-of-a effect. Well, this is my opinion, but if the guy is nerd, that's just too cliche.

AJA · Wed 11/02/2004 13:43:11

I would say that the guy looks a bit menacing in Reizka's version.

QuoteWhich view? Front or side?

Which one looks more like a banana?

MadReizka · Wed 11/02/2004 14:43:23

Quote from: AJA on Wed 11/02/2004 13:43:11
I would say that the guy looks a bit menacing in Reizka's version.

QuoteWhich view? Front or side?
Which one looks more like a banana?

Neither of them.

AJA · Wed 11/02/2004 15:37:13

sigh

MadReizka · Wed 11/02/2004 16:40:55

cough

SLaMgRInDeR · Wed 11/02/2004 17:23:09

i say take the head off the first one and put it onto the rest of the second one (talking about front view)
other than that, looks great! but the hand interfearing with the outline of the trousers kinda looks off, it's not off, but it looks it

AJA · Thu 12/02/2004 14:07:36

Any better?

Just for comparing the views

JimmyShelter · Thu 12/02/2004 15:21:28

This increased the bananafactor.

AJA · Thu 12/02/2004 15:47:29