Roxy Fox final version

Started by DonB, Mon 23/01/2006 21:05:14

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Kinoko

ProgZ, that sprite looks amazing!

DonB

Thats great ProgZMax.. people already told me there was something wrong with the eyes, I tried and tried but didn't managed to pull off better eyes.. well.. you did it..

Also the shading is something I am not very good at, I just looked at the paintovers of the other people here and tried to do it like them.. i will use your shadows too.. way better.. thanks a lot.

I will come up with a new version tonight!

Tomas

You have obviously improved this sprite a lot, and it looks pretty darn good by now. But now I wonder, will you be able to animate this? And create new characters and backgrounds that match the style and perfection of this particular sprite?

Maybe you shouldn't go to crazy on detail and strive for ultimate perfection in every little detail, and instead find your own style in which you can produce new art relatively fast. There's really nothing wrong with your first version. In fact, it looks better than many AGS games I've played. And it probably matches the rest of you art better.

Of course everyone wants their game to look the best, but if you aim to high it will take forever to get things done. Something for you to think about perhaps, I don't know...

And please, please modify the cleavage to the way it was in your first version (remove the two top pixels), to make things look at least a little more natural. :)

DonB

Thanks Tomas, I thought about it too, but I'm convinced that if I just do some more hours of work a sprite i will be able to pull better sprites then i used to, i learned a lot from this topic..

about the cleavage.. i looked the word cleavage up in the translater to dutch and it said "splitup" as result.. now what do you mean by that? something with the hair?

JimmyShelter

Quote from: DonB on Thu 26/01/2006 15:24:55
Thanks Tomas, I thought about it too, but I'm convinced that if I just do some more hours of work a sprite i will be able to pull better sprites then i used to, i learned a lot from this topic..

about the cleavage.. i looked the word cleavage up in the translater to dutch and it said "splitup" as result.. now what do you mean by that? something with the hair?

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DonB

Thanks homes,
in that case:
.. you mean that Tomas?
I really like the top 2 pixels by the cleavage..

Revan

#46
hello, don't fox's have white under their chin? (added skirt as well)



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EDIT: added more white hair on stomach and hands...




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big brother

Ooh, good call. I don't think the fox's paws would fit in high heels either. Time to return to the source, and boot up the old Google Image search.

Ok, after spending about half an hour perusing foxy ladies from the blaxploitation movies of the 70s, I found this!
http://pinker.wjh.harvard.edu/photos/cape_cod/images/red%20fox.jpg
Surprisingly, a real fox looks nothing like the sprite!

Intrigued, I continued my search, and made a startling discovery:
http://thecia.com.au/reviews/f/images/fox-and-the-hound-5.jpg
It would seem that real foxes are like snowflakes; no two are alike! I'm not just talking about the color, either. Look how flat they look in that last photo! It's almost as if God was experimenting with a new medium!

Now I'm not sure whether my Google Searches are just turning up fox porn, but I have yet to find any photos of a fox wearing any clothing at all! Actually, I couldn't find any standing poses. I guess the internet-surfing guy foxes have a real thing for the doggy style positions!

Looks like it's major rework time for you, DonB! (And all of us with paintovers, too. Man, we were all way off!)
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DonB

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Revan
Revan, very nice edit, really.. but I already experimented with the white thing on Roxy, didn't seemed to work out good, she keeps looking like a man because of the white "beard".. tho i really like your edit! Appreciated.. (altho she got the legs of tina turner over 10 yearsÃ,  ;D ;D)

Bigbro
Hehe, Bigbrother I enjoyed your post.
But say it personally.. don't you like doggystyle most? .. anyways.. back to topic..

Dont think I didnt googled for foxes too at the beginning, I did.. but:
It was the whole idea to make a more human-like fox standing on her feet and wearing cloths!! But i guess you are just joking around now.. I really aint gonna make her on 4 feet and completely naked you dirrty boy!Ã,  ;D

You are right, Roxy doesnt look like a real fox if you compare her.. but I'm sure you will recognise a fox in it..

and if you dont; what about tasmanian devils, you think Taz.. the famous cartoon looks any bit on a real tasmanian devil? If you are curious google for a tasmanian devil.


Shane 'ProgZmax' Stevens

The bit of white Revan added to her chest actually doesn't look bad, but the face just makes her look like she's got a five o'clock shadow.  I'd consider using the white on the chest, though.  She's starting to remind me of one of the Master of Furry Eric Schwartz's creations:

http://www.airwalking.com/images/turnpike/schwartz.jpg

Also, some of his work might help you with ideas for your other characters:
http://www.furnation.com/eric_schwartz/gallery1.htm

big brother

Quote from: ProgZmax on Thu 26/01/2006 18:58:07
the Master of Furry

I may be alone here, but this title scares me.
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ildu

Those sites creep the crap out of me.

Haddas


ildu

I'm referring to those furry drawing sites, where some deviant people draw images of human-like furry female animals with penises having sex with other animals.

DonB

#54
Lol..
what are you guys talking about.. the first site looks great.. that fox looks a bit like Roxy..

second site ("http://www.furnation.com/eric_schwartz/gallery1.htm"), doesn't work by me..

EDIT: works now.. looks great progz.. but why the hell did they steal my idea :(

Becky

A voluptuous fox is hardly an original idea ;)

DonB

Apparently not.. tho.. i do think my concept is original.. a sexy lady detective.. in a man-ish detective story.. and why not a fox in that case ;)

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