Off the Side Space ships

kaaZ · Thu 13/05/2004 19:30:18

Is that back wing supposed to be on the same spot as the one we see in front ? If so, it's position is off...you should bring it down and more to the left....it's position looks realy weird now...
I'd make the cockpit less dark and add more highlight...
Also...It would look better if you'd carve this "A429" number into the ship...by using highlights and shadows...if you know what I mean....instead of just writing it down.....
Apart form that I dig this ship....

Cheers!

kaaZ

Iwan · Fri 14/05/2004 18:36:19

thanks KaaZ. The 'back wing' is on top of the ship and the cock pit is now going to be transparent and i'm going to draw a man inside. I'll ingrave the 'A429' in.

Here is a knew space ship i made in 3D because i might have some 3D animation (like sam and max with the helicopter and the lift if you know what i mean). It's my first go at making a 3D model and I made it with anim8or. Is it ok? I haven't coloured it in yet and I was wandering if anyone had some idease for colours?

Iwan

Iwan · Fri 14/05/2004 22:27:05

Here is a anomther version of the space ship. I've also had a go animating it... Any C&C...

Iwan

stuh505 · Sun 16/05/2004 03:02:23

the current model for the spaceship looks really good, but i think you need to work on your texturing...like with the glass, and id think a spaceship would have some detail like seems and rivets and stuff

Iwan · Mon 17/05/2004 15:23:47

Thanks stu505.

I'm looking for criticism on the texture of the dome. Any better? I'm working on putting rivets onÃ,Â the body at the moment but it's taking some time.

IWan

Phemar · Mon 17/05/2004 16:24:17

Sweet ship!

Hollister Man · Mon 17/05/2004 18:10:23

Reminds me of the Kilrathi in Wing Commander, don't know why....

"My offspring will devour yours"- Leader of Kilrathi battle fleet