Thoughts and crits on story

Started by [Cameron], Fri 29/07/2005 12:59:29

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[Cameron]

Fri 29/07/2005 12:59:29
Hey guys,
Been a while since I posted in crits I think. This is a story I wrote out on napkins because I had no paper. Tell me what you think and any crits you have.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/21121842/


-Cameron

deadsuperhero

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Fri 29/07/2005 17:13:14
Very good!  :D
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