Comic Contest (13/2 - 27/2) Winner: MrBen

[Kinoko]

SPC: Awesome comic! One thing bugged me though... "You took way too fucking long to set up that shot" seems like it would sound better as "You took way too fucking long setting that shot up". Or something. But anyway, the art is -great-! Always love your drawings.

Neil: GREAT! I love it

[Afflict]

Great work, SPC! I thought yours was funnier too... mmmph

[SpacePirateCaine]

Funny, that - I was actually having trouble coming up with an appropriately good line in that frame. Being the only real speech in the comic, it's really important, too.

I was originally going to have a few more frames, where the caddie said, essentially, "It's three in the afternoon, we're on the sixth hole of eighteen and we've been here since dawn. I'm tired, hungry and you make me wear these stupid damned caddie pants every time we come here. I'm going home" Or something along those lines, but I thought that was just a little too agro for the comic, and would've dragged it on longer than it needed to. I like your rewrite of the line.

Not even sure if that's a shot, a drive, a putt or what. I don't know the first thing about golf. Oh well, it was fun to draw, and I loved the other entries in the contest as well. Took me a moment to figure out Neil's as well, but it was definitely well executed.

[Kinoko]

I don't know crap about golf either so it sounds fine to me. I thought it was a great line though, really made me laugh ^_^ Actually, I'm not sure if my rewrite does sound better anymore. I'm an English teacher in a foreign country, I'm losing touch with the English through analysing it too much.

[Corey]

Hurry MrBen start a new one!! I cant wait 

[Squinky]

He hasn't been logged on since the 18th, you might need to go to a second place winner if this takes too long.

[Corey]

shall I PM him?? you get an email to confirm a PM message right??

[Gilbert]

Let it be, it's just the 1st March.